Friday, December 14, 2007
Food Fair article
An International Food Fair was held by F.2 students in Methodist College on 7th of December. F.2 students had prepared for the Food Fair for about two weeks. They were grouped into groups and worked on different countries of food. F.1 students and teachers of Methodist College were invited to the International Food Fair. The money that they've earn are going to donate to the Doctor's without Bothers. The International Food Fair was held in the Lower Hall of Methodist College. All of the students and teachers enjoyed the Food Fair very much.
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Stephanie, your article started strongly, stating all of the relevant facts; but towards the end, there wasn't much cohesion; that is, random facts were just tossed into your writing. Maybe paragraphing would help you. Proofreading for spelling and grammar would also benefit this piece.
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